WIP - Taste of Things To Come

Hello, first off, let me start on a high note by saying that your drawings are very well done. The art is clean, its flows as a story and is easy as well as enjoyable to read. Now for the critiques, which I will admit upfront that there are minimal.

First: I notice that the size of the shrunken woman seems to vary from page to page and although it helps with the story of being swallowed, it does make it confusing as if she is the same size throughout the story or if she continues shrinking. I point this out due to fact that on some pages the SW seems to be almost a quarter size of the sandwich, but come time for her to be bitten and ingested she easily fits into the mouth.

Second: I am a bit confused as to how the woman when mashing her sandwich, does not notice the solid bulge in her meal. It's as though she knows the girl is in there, but is playing innocent, but that would not match up with the text.

Other than that I would only ask that You not write a page that flips upside down as it makes it very hard to read, but it was fun nonetheless. These three things are the only problem I notice, in my opinion, which is why the vision and the impact are lower than the rest. Keep up the good work though and I look forward to seeing more from you.